“There are only two ways off this roof,” said Lucy.
Gerald peered over the edge at the stained concrete below.
He knew he wasn’t the first man given this choice.
He knew he wouldn’t be the last man given this choice.
And he knew, all the others would have made the decision as quick and easy as he had.
Ooo, sound effects! Crunchy.
Love the sound effects!
Thanks, Marge. I think they add a lil something.
Ouch!
Mmmhmmm.
Ooooo, I like!
Cheers, Peter.
Gotta stay for the sound effects. Ooh!
hah, thanks, Real. 🙂
OOOOOOOOO mystery. 🙂
Mmhmmm. 😛
I like the animation aspects and the sounds
A tad more visually arresting. There’s more I can add later on.
Might I suggest you consider adding captions on the YouTube video? It’s mostly a suggestion but I think it would help those that might not be so great with English 🙂
Good thinking. I think YouTube studio has a tool for that. I’ll look into their tools for auto-doing it.
Lucy’s quite the fiend. How does she get them up there? I agree with the others, the sound effects are really cool 🙂
We’ll find that out this week. Cheers, Devina.
Good use of sound effects
Thank you, Robert.
There were two choices. What was the other choice,?
We’ll find out! 🙂
This is some good stuff
Thank you, Aavi.
The ironic humor is so pungently electrifying. Anand Bose from Kerala
Arf, thanks, Aand.
Love your black birds!
Thank you, Jude. 🙂
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